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Belinda Drakes's avatar

This felt like standing in a house that remembered me better than I remembered myself.There was something unbearably tender about the way she stayed, even knowing it was only an echo built from the shape of her own refusal. Not foolish. Not weak. Just human in the most ancient way. We do not let go because something ends. We let go because something in us finally loosens its grip on the illusion of forever.

lokikone's avatar

Thank you for reading and the kind response.

Alex Eos's avatar

This is good!

Alex Eos's avatar

You’re welcome

Rebecca Watson (ReBe)'s avatar

Spectacular!! You did such an amazing job with this story💚

lokikone's avatar

Thank you so much.